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Draft a difficult email in three passes

Use AI to get the first draft out, then ask for a clearer version and a warmer version before you send it.

By LY ·

Executive take

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The tip

For a difficult email, do not ask AI for the perfect version first. Ask for three passes: direct, warmer, and shorter. The comparison helps you find the message you actually want to send.

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Business leader

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        The tip

        For a difficult email, do not ask AI for the perfect version first. Ask for three passes: direct, warmer, and shorter. The comparison helps you find the message you actually want to send.

        Where it helps

        Use it for missed deadlines, performance feedback, customer disappointment, negotiation follow-ups, internal conflict, and any message where tone matters as much as content.

        How to try it

        Write the facts in bullets. Then ask: “Draft this as a direct email. Then give me a warmer version and a shorter version. Keep the ask clear and remove blame.” Take the best parts from each. Before sending, check that the email still sounds like you.

        Caveats

        Do not outsource judgment. If the message needs accountability, keep it. If it needs empathy, add it yourself. Never paste private employee or customer detail into an unapproved AI tool.

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